my poem

salam
I would like to share with you one of my poems and I'll be glad to recieve your comments

Going to the unknown
By: sana rouabhia

Algeria dearest country
What is happening to you?
Blood and melancholy
In each part of you
I hold my hands to sky
To ask god for a miracle
And I saw a dove
Leaving her nest
To the unknown
I cried and cried
Asking her to come back
But the dove left my country
To the unknown
And in a moment of meditation
I saw a queue of children
Following the dove
Going to the unknown
I cried and cried asking
Them to come back
But the children left my country
To the unknown
Then like a nightmare
I saw a crowd walking
Following the dove
Going to the unknown
I cried and cried
Asking them to come back
But people left my country
To the unknown
And I found my self alone
With death blood and melancholy
So I pulled out my heart and soul
And grew them in your land
I watered them by my blood
And I walked I walked
Following the dove
Going to the unknown
Yes I left my country
To the unknown

Your poem is full of pessimism and passiveness towards the true sense of life. Yet your style is powerful and indicating, and your imagination is vivid and fertile. Please accept my admiration and respect.